Friday, April 9, 2010

7 floors down.....

Sitting on the floor in front of the closet,
Looking at your shirts, many shades of russet,
Never did notice that your were so partial to brown,
Next to you I must have looked like a colourful clown,
I can almost feel you here as I hold ur soft cotton pants,
Remembering you wearing them during our last dance,
I'm folding your socks, the blacks with the blue,
Knowing if they're mismatched, it irritates you,
An intoxicating scent was brought in by this wind,
Your cologne was made to make women sin,
I see our bed at the corner of my eye,
A towel lies there, by now it must be dry,
Your Robert Ludlum's "The matarese countdown",
Is left at our nightstand, folded at page 121,
I'm still living with you in this room for two,
How I miss your constant instructions on what to do,
People think I'm crazy, sinking in suppressed sorrow,
I really am not that upset we didn't have our tomorrow,
You left me here with a roomful of memories,
I thought I could go on living like this for centuries,
Sometimes I can still feel you hugging me tight,
And those careless and clumsy, sleepy kisses at night,
Just coz I love you, it doesn't mean you're off the hook,
I'm still angry that you didn't teach me how to fish and to cook,
What am I doing alone, answer me if you can,
What now mr perfectionist, what happen to your fool-proof plan,
Our account book is not done, but the bills are paid,
You know I hate numbers, oh! and I've sacked the maid,
Living like this, surrounded by everything that's you,
The temptation to come to you is killing me too,
One day in this room when your scent is not found,
I'll put my feet at the balcony railing to make my final jump.

9 comments:

  1. i'm speechless! every line is conveying so much...simply awesome gal!

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  2. this is so good... Loved every word.

    I dunno what genre this is, but henceforth I'm gonna say "I like '789' poems"

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  3. rach - thanx gal... u r too generous. :-)

    just a pen in my hand - well... i guess thts just sumthin eh..

    flame since 89- thanx dearie... feels nice when someone thinks its nice as well....

    saurabh- didnt think u'd like sappy stuff like mine. "789 poems" sound kinda nice, doesnt it. lol u're sweet ;-) thanx dude... i honestly appreciate it.

    gyanban- why does ur "dripping with love" sound like an insult?! me nt happy...

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  4. whoaaa.....that was somthng best ,i hav read recently..whhoaaa.....grt expression u hav..keep it up....hope 2 c more of ur work..:)

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  5. WOW.....grl...that was simply wow.....im falling short of word after reading your words...coming right from ur heart and peircing thru mine...!! awesome....!!!! wht expression of feelings in every line...wht emotions...wht love...wht commitment...!!! im in love with ur work..!!!

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  6. BEAUTY IS A FACTOR LINKED WITH THE HEART AND NOT THE FACE...!! A BEAUTIFUL PERSON IS THE OUTCOME OF A MUCH BEAUTIFUL HEART...!!!

    Very nice line and a very nice blog....M u r fan :)

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